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托福寫作結尾段 | 托福培訓西安

2019-08-31 16:26

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  一、托福作文的最后總結教訓或提出建議

  In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.

  二、提出令人憂慮的結果或可能出現的負面結果

  e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.

  三、提出問題留待讀者思考

  In conclusion, it is inevitable for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children to commit serious mistakes like theft and robbery?

  托福作文結尾段寫作技巧

  1.Do you agree or disagree: it is easier to maintain good health nowadays than it was in the past.

  In a nutshell, it is easier to maintain good health for people nowadays than it was in the past, not only because of a higher level of medical care brought about by breakthroughs in modern medical science and technology, but of countless sports facilities which render regular exercise more realizable especially for city dwellers. But what is more important is that people should keep steadfast resolutions to say goodbye to the old unhealthy way of life and fully carry out their fitness schedules.

  這個結尾的句式不錯,先來一個 not only...but also...的并列 引出主體段中的兩個并列的原因.然后再來一個 what is more important is that 的主語從句來發起一個倡議.我們使用的時候只要把兩個理由替換一下就可以了.至于倡議部分大家可以根據自己的情況來決定是否留下.重點表達:render sth + adj 以及 city dwellers 還有 keep steadfast resolutions to.

  2.Agree or disagree, the world is changing so quickly that people now are less happy or less satisfied than in the past ?

  In a nutshell, there is every reason to believe that people today are less satisfied than those in the past, not only because of exacerbating environmental conditions, but of increasingly rapid rhythm of life. What is important for governments today is that they should stop at almost nothing to achieve sustainable development and place emphasis on the improvement of people’s life quality.

  本題是一個今昔對比的題目,立場是同意,理由是環境差、生活節奏快.我們只需要把兩個理由填進去即可.最后在對政府提出期望,希望他們關注民生,重視可持續發展.重點表達有:there is every reason to do sth 以及 exacerbate 和 rhythm of life 還有 stop at almost nothing to do sth 最后還有 place emphasis on sth.

  托福作文結尾段寫作模板

  In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that_____. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.

  To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.

  As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.

  To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.

  In conclusion, the arguer fails to _____. To strengthen the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that____. To better evaluate the argument, we need more information about that____.

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